The People Catcher Rework

Okay here it is, my first deviation in a very long time
I have decided, so that i can improve my digital artwork skills, that i am going to remake some of my hand drawn sketches from when i first started deviantart.
This is a remake of 'The People Catcher' See here:[link]
Please let me know what you think of it and any improvements that could be made...also i know the people aren't coloured in, i like it that way